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Valerie S
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 15:37
I'm going to tighten up my online portfolio and drop three shots. If you have a moment, please take a look and let me know your opinion of your least liked shot or two, I'd really appreciate it.

http://www.babymonster.com (http://www.babymonster.com/)


Thanks,
Valerie

GCRollo
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 15:53
There weren't any I could say I didn't like..

Why do you feel the need to take 3 out? More is better (Within Reason Of Course)... I didn't feel it was overwhelming, if anything, I wanted to see a few more.

Nice images by the way!...

Whats the story w/ the girl punk band?

narlus
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 15:59
i guess i'll check 'em out at home. i got this screen:

"The following URL is blocked by [my company's] policy because of its content categorization by our subscription service: "Pornography""

:D

Valerie S
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 16:14
Thanks Glen. I may replace 005.jpg with this one as people know who he is (ewx-Nirvana but now in Flipper):
http://www.babymonster.com/samples/8676.jpg

The girl band is Von Iva. http://www.voniva.com Local SF band but is getting a lot of attention. I'm sure they'll be seen more after there new disc is released in August.

Narlus, I used to do adult web design (and mainstream - many years ago) and listed my domain with the kid protection bureaus. No porno on my site, but I can't get the rating lifted.

simonSE15
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 17:19
left to right:
4, 9, 11 my least favourite.
2, 7, 17 my favourite.
for what its worth!

bacchanal
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 17:47
Thanks Glen. I may replace 005.jpg with this one as people know who he is (ewx-Nirvana but now in Flipper)
A great guy too.

I agree with Glen that you don't have to take any out, but if you insist, my least favorite are:

009.jpg
003.jpg - face seems blown
010.jpg - don't like the bg and that the guitar is cropped

René Damkot
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 17:51
More then three:

Third row: #2 and 3
Fourth row: #3
Fifth row: #1,2 3
Last row: #1.

Some nice images, some not good enough for portfolio IMO. (Nice in a series, not by themselves)

YMMV.

narlus
9th of July 2007 (Mon), 22:40
i'd ditch 4th row #1 (002a) and 2nd row #2 (005; at least maybe b/w it).

last row #1 (004) is a good moment, just not quite the right framing it needs and it would be good to see a bit more of the guitarist's face.

Valerie S
10th of July 2007 (Tue), 00:50
Thanks for all of the input. It's seems more over the place than I thought.

Borderfox
10th of July 2007 (Tue), 02:05
Hi Valerie, my two cents. 004,005, 010 would be the ones I would drop. Nice shots though, great emotion in them.