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jb
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 02:11
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Tv = 1/200
Av = 11
Exposure Compensation = 0
ISO Speed = 400
Lens = Standard Digital Rebel 18.0 - 55.0 mm
Focal Length = 34.0 mm
RAW
Contrast = +1
Sharpness = +1
Color saturation = +1
Color tone = Normal

http://furio.spoof.org/~jburns/images/dt2_2_600.png

Radtech1
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 02:34
WELL DONE!

I normally dont like abstract, but this is an excellent catch!

Since you are in "Critique Corner" and not "Share Photos", I will offer a thought.

If I felt particularlly photoshoppy, I might get rid of the top floor of the building. With even less context, it might be an even more interesting shot.

Rad

jb
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 03:10
Thanks for the feedback. Here it is without the top.


http://furio.spoof.org/~jburns/dt2_2_600_2.png

Radtech1
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 04:28
Actually, I was thinking of something more like this. I like the square format.

http://home.ripway.com/2004-2/78486/Canon/dt2_2_600.jpg

Or Perhaps

http://home.ripway.com/2004-2/78486/Canon/dt2_2_6001.jpg

or

http://home.ripway.com/2004-2/78486/Canon/dt2_2_6002.jpg

or even

http://home.ripway.com/2004-2/78486/Canon/dt2_2_6003.jpg

LightHunter
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 05:14
Good eye for abstract. I immediately had the same thought as Radtech1 and he did a nice job with the post-processing. Print a set of 3 posters and put them in your living room. Top class art!

shniks
12th of June 2004 (Sat), 07:38
Excellent shot, I like all crops, and the pink photoshopped one is fantastic, well done Radtech.