A few more from my first wedding.

[Hassan2285]

Hey guys and gals

Here are a few more I processed. I didn't want to put them in the old thread, because I didn't think everyone would look at them again. I hope this isn't against forum rules, if it is you can delete the thread and I can post the pictures in the other thread.

I really need feedback to better myself so please feel free to say whatever you feel when you look at these.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/Wedding07_07_070778.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/Wedding07_07_070579.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/Wedding07_07_070284.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/Wedding07_07_070570.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/Wedding07_07_070461copy.jpg

[ImagineTNT]

Nice shots. The mirror one is my favorite of the bunch.

[Kathy H]

The mirror one is my favorite too. They are nice captures but I'm personally not real into the special effects(or whatever you call it). They look a little to dark for my tastes.

[italianfemmy]

The first one is too contrasty for me. I really like number 2.
Number 3 is okay but the lamp in the mirror distracts my eye
I like number 4 but prefer it without the bottom of the wall in it.
The last one is nowhere near as good for me as your other one like this in the other thread. :-)

[xtravaluemeal1]

I like the mirror shot because the mirror looks like a old film negative...that was cool..the last shot is a little TMI for me. It's not elegant when I can see underneath the dress

[howzitboy]

nice pictures, bit dark and moody looking but work for me.

i agree, the last one dont work for me very well cuz u can see stuff thats not supposed to be seen. but, if u focused on the girls face, it would have rocked.

[Hassan2285]

yeah, I see what you guys are saying, the reason, I like the shot is because the little girl seems like shes looking into her future. I wish I used a higher aperture, so her facial expression was more visible.

this is the last one.

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/Hassan2285/_MG_5525.jpg

[LisaLayne]

The first one is too contrasty for me. I really like number 2.
Number 3 is okay but the lamp in the mirror distracts my eye
I like number 4 but prefer it without the bottom of the wall in it.
The last one is nowhere near as good for me as your other one like this in the other thread. :-)

This is a good exchange of technical opinions! I agree with regard to #1... one thing all wedding photogs need to learn (and this will greatly improve your images... especially in the church/temple) DYS - translation - DRAG YOUR SHUTTER!
As for #3... I love the dramatic lighting so much I did not even notice the lamp. Your eye is drawn immediately to the interaction between the man and boy... excellent job!
The mirror photograph is well lit, but you need to decide what view of the face you want to capture... full, 2/3 or profile. If you look at the bride's left eye, the white of her eye is too big... turn her head slightly and direct her eyes to a fixed point to eliminate all that white.

Great job...
Lisa

[MarkAnthonyPhotography]

I like them all. They all have a story behind it, and that is to me what makes a great shot. Even if my version of the story is completely off the books!! lol. Glad to see another "southerner" posting some pics. I'm to scared to!!:lol: