rainy day by the stop light

[berto]

the light was taking too long to turn green so i took a few shots.

i purposely focused on the dash and blurred a little the outside.
i think it looks kinda interesting, the composition.

tell me what u think?

berto

http://www.netpci.com/~kingb/traffic_final.jpg

[clos]

Berto,

I am not sure what you were going for here. As far as composition I don't think it works for me. It looks just as you say a picture taken at a stop light. I can't give anyfurther comment on how to make this shot work.

Don't give up though, you obviously see something. Keep in mind it is incredibly difficult to make the mundane an interesting or compelling photograph so it'll take some work. Good luck!

[rick barclay]

Berto, a rain shot will get you rave reviews as long as it's taken outside
in the rain. Anything else is just pooh, pooh.