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Yella Fella
27th of July 2007 (Fri), 19:01
Not posted this wedding up from jiune, but it was my first real posed/directed photography alongside my usual PJ stuff. As long as I love PJ, i need to induce more coupley shots. Would like some C&C thanks.

I have a biggish wedding tommorow to cover, and really want to up my game in the posing side.

1. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura002.jpg

2. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura003.jpg

3. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura004.jpg

4. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura005.jpg

5. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura006.jpg

6. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura007.jpg

7. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura008.jpg

8. http://blog.edwardlui.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/robertlaura014.jpg
Miyagi-san
27th of July 2007 (Fri), 20:37
Nice shots...personally I think #5 should have been a LITTLE more to the left....just a little. Good luck!
danpass
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 00:25
I'd probably use a different lens than what is shown here (unless the distorted look is the goal).



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dsze
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 00:43
I'd probably use a different lens than what is shown here (unless the distorted look is the goal).
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I agree. I think I would have chosen an different focal length for many of these.
Yella Fella
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 07:07
guess 24mm is quite wide on a 5D, keep forgetting how wide that is :confused:
Raphael V
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 08:27
well 24mm gives odd persepective when faces are involved.
Still, i like 5,7 and 8.
k_blais
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 10:00
1 - I love the emotion in this picture
2 - There's something about it that I don't quite like...maybe it's the fact that the bride is the only one looking at you and that she seems to be leaning forward too much?
3- I like this one better, you seem to have caught a natural moment and I like the look the father of the groom!
4-Got to love the kid shots :)
5- I like the idea, but I don't like how a part of the groom is cropped out.
6 - Again, good idea, but the bride is the only one looking at you. Maybe try to have the couple look at one another or at you.
7 - This shot is my favorite. I love the colors and the angle!
8- I like this one as well, especially the expression of the groom

I am sure the B&G will be very pleased :)
Fireflyphotography
28th of July 2007 (Sat), 14:16
CUTE!!!