635165631th Website redesign critique welcomed

[bestfromnw]

new version
http://www.groupshotphoto.com (http://www.groupshotphoto.com/)

previous version
http://groupshotphoto.com/index2.html

[Dchemist]

I like the new version. Why do you have an image of a camera? I expected some sort of link connceted to the image. Good luck, Dennis

[rcheung07]

From a web designers prospective. I see alot of wasted space on the top right side of your logo. I would put the navigation there and use more of the space for larger photos and content. Yea the image of the camera has to go, looks like something from those scamming sites.

[DDA]

I would be careful with the orthograph and grammar (mind you, I'm not a native english speaker). This jumped at me, I don't know why...

"f you're a model and looking to start your carrier"

[bestfromnw]

I would be careful with the orthograph and grammar (mind you, I'm not a native english speaker). This jumped at me, I don't know why...

"f you're a model and looking to start your carrier"

lol i'll change that (english is my 4th language :o)

[souporman]

Much better this time round bestfromnw! Couple comments though:

1. Move the home/about us/contact/rates links up into the black bar along the top (obviously change the colours so they're easily visible). I didn't see them at first, and moving them up there would help fill in all of that empty space.

2. It's still too wide on a 1024x768 screen resolution.

3. Your left hand menu takes up an awful lot of room now. It would be a more efficient use of that space if you overlayed the titles onto their coresponding images (as in, shift the words to the left).

Overall though, it looks like it has a lot more potential than before. Nice work!

[Yanis]

Much better this time round bestfromnw! Couple comments though:

1. Move the home/about us/contact/rates links up into the black bar along the top (obviously change the colours so they're easily visible). I didn't see them at first, and moving them up there would help fill in all of that empty space.

2. It's still too wide on a 1024x768 screen resolution.

3. Your left hand menu takes up an awful lot of room now. It would be a more efficient use of that space if you overlayed the titles onto their coresponding images (as in, shift the words to the left).

Overall though, it looks like it has a lot more potential than before. Nice work!


Ditto on all of the above.

Plus,

4. I'm not too excited about he arrow the appears when you hover on your links/titles. I agree with souporman by shifting the words a little to the left.

5. I love the pano shot at the bottom of the page but I would rather see it somewhere on top of the page. Maybe incorporate it with the banner or something...just my 2 cents on that.


Overall, it is definitely better than the previous one.

Peace,
Yanis :D