Some live music, want critique

[BackPack]

1.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BeneaththeSky008.jpg
Beneath the Sky
2.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BeneaththeSky009.jpg
Beneath the Sky
3.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BornofOsiris019copy.jpg
Born of Osiris
4.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/IMG_1449copy.jpg
A Heartwell Ending
5.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/c4.jpg
We Held Manhattan
All comments and critique will be appreciated.

[howzitboy]

nice shots! they came out pretty good. exposures are great and in focus so u got those two perfect, so composition is next:

first shot, too much dead space above him and wish had something in the bg to show it was a live.

second shot id want to see more of the person in audience who is singing and less of the space above them.

third is perfect!

fourth u cut off his head a bit.

last shot is another perfect one (my fav out of these).

you should feel proud of these shots!! way better then what i could have taken.

[VegasGeorge]

Great work! How the heck did you get the motion blur in the last shot? He's so sharp, and the guitar is so nicely blurred. I'm really puzzled.

[ZL4life]

#5 Is just great. I love it how long of an exposure was that?!

i agree about the second, needs to be tilted down a bit so we can see more people less black

[BackPack]

#5 was a .8 second exposure, I was firing my flash off camera left with a sync cord just holding it in my hand and praying I didn't shake and jack up the exposure
thanks