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BackPack
5th of August 2007 (Sun), 23:27
1.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BeneaththeSky008.jpg
Beneath the Sky
2.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BeneaththeSky009.jpg
Beneath the Sky
3.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/BornofOsiris019copy.jpg
Born of Osiris
4.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/IMG_1449copy.jpg
A Heartwell Ending
5.http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c3/Back_Pack/c4.jpg
We Held Manhattan
All comments and critique will be appreciated.

howzitboy
6th of August 2007 (Mon), 03:34
nice shots! they came out pretty good. exposures are great and in focus so u got those two perfect, so composition is next:

first shot, too much dead space above him and wish had something in the bg to show it was a live.

second shot id want to see more of the person in audience who is singing and less of the space above them.

third is perfect!

fourth u cut off his head a bit.

last shot is another perfect one (my fav out of these).

you should feel proud of these shots!! way better then what i could have taken.

VegasGeorge
6th of August 2007 (Mon), 20:54
Great work! How the heck did you get the motion blur in the last shot? He's so sharp, and the guitar is so nicely blurred. I'm really puzzled.

ZL4life
6th of August 2007 (Mon), 21:40
#5 Is just great. I love it how long of an exposure was that?!

i agree about the second, needs to be tilted down a bit so we can see more people less black

BackPack
7th of August 2007 (Tue), 00:58
#5 was a .8 second exposure, I was firing my flash off camera left with a sync cord just holding it in my hand and praying I didn't shake and jack up the exposure
thanks