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[lilpacheco]

More pictures from my first photo shoot. Helpful criticism appreciated! :)

[milleker]

Like the tones in both of these, great B&W.

#1 is nice, be careful of the frame - its cutting her fingers off. Also, I think she is too centered in the frame - try moving her to the right a little?.

#2 is a little confusing. Looks like the image is upside down and the grown up hand is cut off at the fingers. These types of shots work if you can include the large hands as well so we can see a sense of size between the two.

[zippy25]

Overall, I like both shots...I am not a fan of the vignetting at all. You don't need it forthese shots. I am not a huge fan of the chicken wire fence behind the girl...I think it would look better with a different background, or at least on chicken wire. The second shot appears upside down...at least it is messing with my head if it is not. I like the use of B&W in both, especially in #2.

[Robert_Lay]

I am seeing the same thing here that I saw in your color photo, earlier. Same suggestion - provide some EXIF data and post the image as it came from the camera.

[rasmussen4]

In the first picture she's way to centered. Use the Rule of 3rds, and crop up closer with the bottom of the picture around the lower stomach region. And the fence would have helped the picture more if it was something that she could have put her elbows up on, or maybe had one leg lifted against it. A little too much DPOF in the 2nd one for my taste.