C&C on a photo shoot - Adult, no nudity music video promo

[MissSage]

I just did a photo shoot to promote the release of a music video, here is one of the pictures I have edited so far... c&c please.. btw the name of the song is "talk to me dirty" hence: sexy subjects http://photoshoptechniques.com/forum/images/smilies/3.gif I have a ton of pics and had to start somewhere, thanks ahead of time. PS: here is a link to the song, you can hear it and see the lyrics. http://www.feistyb.com/song/1
Thanks,
Sage
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g72/SageLady/keo3.jpg

[B3SEO]

I like it. Interesting expression on the blonde. That's the only thing I would change.

[chauncey]

2 things struck me-the washed out hand and the crease under the armpit of the blonde singer. Are we looking at an unprocessed image?

[MissSage]

it's a long story.... the pictures were taken during a making of the video which was being done by someone else.. I was trying to get a nice promo shot on chance but was not running the show. I will work on the armpit and see what I can do about the washed out hand... so far I have gotten the same opinions on the blonde's expression... I will look through the other pictures and see if I can find a better one. Thanks so much for the input!!