Check out my summers work

[Grentz]

Well I have been working on a website for a restaurant, but the very cool thing is that I have also been able to take all the photographs on location for it!

So far here is what I have:
www.Bphils.com (http://www.Bphils.com)

The images in the headers are all taken by me (they are different on each page) and also the images in the gallery are by me, not to mention the whole site and such :p

Tell me what you think, I need some fellow POTN C&C/Feedback!

[20droger]

Looks nice overall, but I think it would be much nicer if you learned how to use English. You know, punctuation, grammar, all that stuff.

And yes, I know I'll be flamed for this post. But you did ask my opinion, did you not?

A site with bad English doesn't attract me to use whatever the services are. To the contrary, it inspires me to look elsewhere.

[Dchemist]

Good start! The landing page is a bit dull. You might add some of your images as page graphics or links to give people a warmer welcome. I also expected food photos of wonderful dishes. In order to address 20drogers suggestion on spelling and grammer, you might solicit an independent set of eyes (or a couple sets) and have them look at every page specifically for the technicalities of the English. It is easy to get close to what you written and you don't see the big picture - I do it all the time. Good luck, Dennis

[Grentz]

Thanks for the comments guys, much appreciated!

It is still early so grammer and such is being worked on, plus a lot of the things posted are just temp. "Filler" to see how things layout and such. It has only been live for a few days to start getting indexed by google and such.

I will work on warming up the front page, I might try and add some more graphic links somewhere. Problem is the main middle area is a blog news roll so it is not easy to add graphics there, but around the top and sides I can try to.

Again thanks for the comments so far and keep them coming!