Out of frame test samples, please critics !

[Sendide]

Hi dear friends
following your advises and help, I kind of learned a bit how to put some subjects out of the frame in some of my pictures. here are some samples and your critics are as usual very welcome
thanks in advance
regards
Khalid

http://img69.photobucket.com/albums/v211/ksendide/CRW_0047bis.jpg

[img]http://img69.photobucket.com/albums/v211/ksendide/CRW_0001bis.jpg
http://img69.photobucket.com/albums/v211/ksendide/CRW_0023bis.jpg

[Radtech1]

Very nice. I am jealous. You have an outstanding run of posts here, so I will just touch on a couple.

The dolphins fin needs smoothing, otherwise it is fine.

The whale (?) is just fine as is.

The iguana's fingers need to be blocking the outer dark frame, not superimposed. Also, if you are going to have his head that close to the outer dark frame, you should have a bite taken out of the frame right there. It would do two things - put a little space between his head and the frame, and provide a bit of a light touch.

Rad

[Sendide]

thanks rad for the quiq reply
good point for the third picture. for the dolphin, in the original pict it looks pretty smooth, just that when processed for the post, something happened to it.
regards
Kh

[Big_B]

Very nice. I am jealous. You have an outstanding run of posts here, so I will just touch on a couple.

The dolphins fin needs smoothing, otherwise it is fine.

The whale (?) is just fine as is.

The iguana's fingers need to be blocking the outer dark frame, not superimposed. Also, if you are going to have his head that close to the outer dark frame, you should have a bite taken out of the frame right there. It would do two things - put a little space between his head and the frame, and provide a bit of a light touch.

Rad

Cool pics. I'd go with rad's suggestions but also you might try leaving a little more space below the whale. IMO the photo is too thin and so looks a little unnatural.

Nice work though.

BB