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Nudles
5th of July 2004 (Mon), 14:52
This is some of the first images that I have taken. Any critique at all would be greatly appriciated as I really am a total 'newbie' no matter how obvious you think it may be, just say it.

Be brutal, I can take it, will only help me.

Thanks for taking some time and looking at these. :)

Most are 'Photoshoped'. I am not sure what information to include about the images, so dont hit me if I leave something out. =P


(note: picture quality is slightly degrated due to saving limitations)

OK the first is of my younger brother, as he grouches on the floor.
(A)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/wpilr.jpg
Camera Model: PDC3030 ~ Focal Length: 8mm/F-Number F/2.8
~ Exposure Time: 1/20 sec. ~ ISO Speed: ISO-100

(B)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/ldwf.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/8 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/640 sec.

(C)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/ldrsc.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/4.5 ~ Focal Length: 19mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/60 sec.

(E)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/ldrrs.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/4 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/500 sec.

(F)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/ldrbc1.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/2.8 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/320 sec.

(G)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/lddrc.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/4.9 ~ Focal Length: 23mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/320 sec.

(H)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/lddr.jpg
Camera Model: Canon Powershot A80 ~ Lens Aperture: F/2.8 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/320 sec.

(I)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/bmlsun.jpg
Camera Model: PDC3030 ~ F-Number: F/2.8 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/7812 sec. ~ ISO Speed: ISO-100

(J)http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v336/nudles/Gallery/bmrsun.jpg
Camera Model: PDC3030 ~ F-Number: F/2.8 ~ Focal Length: 8mm ~ Exposure Time: 1/5208 sec. ~ ISO Speed: ISO-100
roanjohn
9th of July 2004 (Fri), 08:49
Too much pictures for me to offer a good critique.

I will pick my favorites though:

The 2 last one and the 2nd one........in that order.

The others are merely snapshots in my book that doesn't evoke any strong emotions. sorry.

Ro1
jonnyhorizon
9th of July 2004 (Fri), 09:00
i find f the most interesting
that one may be improved if taken from the left side where the bud is more developed
you might experiment with F stops on the flowers use a bugger f stop to get more in focus
the levels on some need work some spots are to bright
keep it up...
ryuwulf
9th of July 2004 (Fri), 12:26
Too much pictures for me to offer a good critique.



i agree. Try two pics at a time. With that aside, i like your work. The first one is a great shot, along with the angle.

The flowers were good, and i loved the saturation on them. The last pic of the flower didnt compare to the previous ones.

The clouds did creat mood. I liked how you exposed for the background(sky) rather than the foreground to create the black landscape. i noticed some blocky pixels in the sky, did you make the orignal pics bigger??


bravo......
Nudles
13th of July 2004 (Tue), 15:13
Too much pictures for me to offer a good critique.

I will pick my favorites though:

The 2 last one and the 2nd one........in that order.

The others are merely snapshots in my book that doesn't evoke any strong emotions. sorry.

Ro1

Thanks for your comment. I would have to agree, except I like the first one also. The others are simply me trying to get a half-decent technical photo. Thanks :)


i find f the most interesting
that one may be improved if taken from the left side where the bud is more developed
you might experiment with F stops on the flowers use a bugger f stop to get more in focus
the levels on some need work some spots are to bright
keep it up...

I shall do, I am just starting to learn about F stops. Thanks for the advice I will try that out next time I'm out with my camera.


Too much pictures for me to offer a good critique.



i agree. Try two pics at a time. With that aside, i like your work. The first one is a great shot, along with the angle.

The flowers were good, and i loved the saturation on them. The last pic of the flower didnt compare to the previous ones.

The clouds did creat mood. I liked how you exposed for the background(sky) rather than the foreground to create the black landscape. i noticed some blocky pixels in the sky, did you make the orignal pics bigger??


bravo......

I'm still not sure about the flowers, some people have been saying that I used way to much saturation and others say they like it, heh, I'll have to fine a happy-medium I guess. If you click the clouds they lose their blocky look, the originals are much larger again.
Thank you for your comments.