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Jemmind
5th of July 2004 (Mon), 16:45
Critique wanted.
Too saturated? Pleasing? It's been a while since I manipulated this, and I am not sure what I did to it. But I would like tips on this shot.
http://img42.photobucket.com/albums/v128/jemmind/calloway_gardens_2_069ew.jpg
Thanks guys,
Julie
Meerkat17
5th of July 2004 (Mon), 17:13
I don't feel its over saturated but the colour in the foreground distracts my eye, pulling it down and when I look at that part its out of focus. Overall its a nice image but I thinkI'd crop the foreground out and some of the top and make it more like a panorama type shot!?
David
Jemmind
5th of July 2004 (Mon), 18:01
Does this look better?
http://img42.photobucket.com/albums/v128/jemmind/calloway_gardens_2_069ecw.jpg
Julie
whowie
5th of July 2004 (Mon), 19:54
I like the second one best. Nice shot.
Meerkat17
6th of July 2004 (Tue), 00:56
Yes, I feel that it works much better now as the focus is on the bridge.
David
4walls
6th of July 2004 (Tue), 01:00
I think it would be even better if you could get rid of the branches in the foreground. Can you get closer to the water and shoot it again or move over further to the left when you shoot it?
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