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bbslim
7th of September 2007 (Fri), 09:41
Here are some shots i have taken since I took up photography. Feel free to give advice on how to improve my shots.
http://picasaweb.google.com/retrotech/AutoShots/photo?authkey=nxX-VNOXcsY#s5100262235776496930
http://picasaweb.google.com/retrotech/The4th/photo?authkey=E8SMaSGpTO0#s5083810389213453922
http://picasaweb.google.com/retrotech/TheJerseyRoyaleShoot/photo?authkey=JgTKhMyX6eA#s5080210622951014210
http://picasaweb.google.com/retrotech/Skater/photo?authkey=9dii0fMCywo#s5070508088935026498
Cheers
:)
Snapman
7th of September 2007 (Fri), 11:28
Too much patience required there I'm afraid, so I'll pass by welcoming you and leave others to critique your work :)
ZL4life
7th of September 2007 (Fri), 21:45
yeah. to many pictures to get good critiques. post some of your best one here for some advice.
patlannon
9th of September 2007 (Sun), 20:47
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd9/patlannon/th_WalkersOnTheHarbor.jpg (http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd9/patlannon/WalkersOnTheHarbor.jpg)
I Hope this works out as I Planned...:o
moshe3242
9th of September 2007 (Sun), 22:25
Hi There,
The first set os the cars are my nice, its different, interesting and the expousure is goodto my opinion.
I am not diggin the second and third sets though.
The last set is ok but could have been much better is you have used shallow depth of field. the guy on the skateboard is interesting but all the background is distracting.
hope you find this useful
bbslim
10th of September 2007 (Mon), 01:08
Hi There,
The first set os the cars are my nice, its different, interesting and the expousure is goodto my opinion.
I am not diggin the second and third sets though.
The last set is ok but could have been much better is you have used shallow depth of field. the guy on the skateboard is interesting but all the background is distracting.
hope you find this useful
Yes it helps. Just trying out different things. I have been looking at my progression and I seem to be getting better.
Thanks for the feedback.
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