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djarvik
14th of July 2004 (Wed), 12:51
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ryuwulf
14th of July 2004 (Wed), 12:55
I think it would be better if you had the original color. It like want the chrome to burst out of the brownish tint.
djarvik
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 09:50
it is actually a sephia toning. :( I thought it came out good, I guess I'm wrong ;)

regards!
blinking8s
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 10:22
i like chrome in color, its interesting...

personally I would have taken one close to the bike, a little more abstract I guess
nighthawk
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 13:37
I like it with the Sepia, though it could be a little lighter.

The more distracting thing to me is the Cars in the reflection on the large chrome peice. It's always tough photographing mirror finishes.

If it was your bike I'd take it to someplace with a more neutral background like trees or bushes or brick. The illusion get's brought back to reality by feeling like you're in a Walmart parking lot.

Good job keeping yourself out of the shot!