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nighthawk
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 14:09
I'd appreciate some input on it anyway.

http://images6.fotki.com/v91/photos/3/314779/1127602/SD00130_RJ-vi.jpg

EXIF Image Details
Captured with: Canon EOS Digital Rebel
Width: 3072 pixels
Height: 2048 pixels
Focal Length: 66 mm
Compensation: 0 steps
ISO Speed: 200
Date: 2004-05-30 19:45:54

ryuwulf
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 14:34
I like it as is. The orange is great and the black.
my only suggestion, would be to have a more defined person/silhouette.
bravo!!!

good idea on keeping the image a decent size. it fits my screen and the download was fast.

extra bravo!!

nighthawk
15th of July 2004 (Thu), 14:40
Thanks, the size wasn't my choice per se, but a default from my gallery site, http://members.fotki.com/Eagle333/. I'm glad it works well, though. This is my first post in Critique Corner and I was afraid it would be too small to be clear.

This shot was also a spur-of-the-moment and taken straight from the camera with no adjustments whatsoever. I was very pleased with it when I first saw it.

Ikinaa
16th of July 2004 (Fri), 00:11
I like it,
But I think the person disturbs a bit, and the sun is a bit too much in the center.
The very same picture 5 minutes after when the sun is touching the horizon very slightly would IMo been better

nighthawk
16th of July 2004 (Fri), 00:20
I have pictures from later, the color of the sky changed significantly to near blood red. this was the most dramatic one of the set.