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danieltr
11th of September 2007 (Tue), 18:51
this is my personal page , please post your critique.
Thank you
http://www.betterphoto.com/gallery/free/gallery.asp?mem=246399

dennytang
12th of September 2007 (Wed), 14:46
1st pic: Has a beautiful cloud, but it needs more contrast to focus the attention on the rays of light.
2nd pic: The horizon is slightly unaligned. It's a beautiful time to take a picture, but it has no interest. Perhaps waiting until a jogger or cyclist comes to take a picture would make it more interesting.
I think the bird and the bicycle shots are very generic and lack interest.

danieltr
12th of September 2007 (Wed), 14:51
Thank you, it will help me.
Daniel

kevie
12th of September 2007 (Wed), 14:55
Third image is my favorite(the one of the bike lane) its a solid composition.