Temptation

[vafa]

Here is one shot titled Temptation.
How do you rate it?
Your comments and ideas are highly appreciated.

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[Leighow]

Well I am a bit slow!

I see lots of structural lines, surfaces, textures and colors .. but ... it does not seem to have a focus. Also, I do not see where the temptation comes in.

[vafa]

You're right, but It makes a feeling for me as a whole beyond lines, surfaces, textures and colors . I hope it can do the same fo the others.
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[rick barclay]

Nice pic, but I'd definitely give it a different title.

[NJPete]

Its an interesting subject, although i am not 100 % sure what i am looking at. In some ways the title works, since it makes me question what the temptation is. The only thing that i am not fond of is at the bottom of the image, alot of detail appears to be lost in the shadows. I believe there are lillypads in water, but not sure what else is going on there.

[vafa]

....but I'd definitely give it a different title

Hi Rick,
Try a retitling please.
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[karusel]

I just don't know what to think about the shot... It doesn't automatically awe me, so I guess it isn't superb, also it doesn't repulse me...

Why do photos need titles?