textures & patterns

[sebastianuskyld]

This is my first post, I am very amateur and would like to persue a career in photography, I would appreciate feedback and tips on what I should do to become better. Thanks!

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/bolt.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/broicks.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/fan2.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/insidelantern.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/lantern.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/meter.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/wood.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p164/Uskyld/Sept/woodpanels.jpg

[kenyc]

Not a bad post, that first image. :)

KAC

[sebastianuskyld]

Thank you I appreciate it!

[sebastianuskyld]

Can I please have more comments, I'd like to know what I need to work on

[sebastianuskyld]

(nvm)

[sebastianuskyld]

I'm begining to grow hopeless, can someone please give me comments on these, I need to know before I start to out a portfolio togather.

[kenyc]

Begging is not going to help. :) Make your own judgment based on comparisons to other photos. :)

Generally if you don't get a lot of response, that says something in itself.

KAC

[sebastianuskyld]

I have my own opinion on them, I already know my opinion when I took them, I am looking for other's advice and your statement is really rude! I didn't come here for people to be rude, I came her for nice critisism, help, and tips, not for someone to say nobody comments my pictures because they're bad

[kenyc]

I never said they were bad. I'm just trying to be honest with you. That's the way most people are here, particularly in this section.

There is nothing wrong with your shots, there's nothing particularly outstanding either. I think you've captured some good exposures and some good textures.

Good Luck,
KAC

[Gamut]

Kenny's not being rude. I was thinking what he wrote when I first read it. They lack something to pull you into the images — a first place to look. I think that's why you're not getting any feedback. People aren't sure what to comment on.

Here's one: I like the deck screws. The coloring is very interesting and the symmetry really directs your eye. This one stands out from all the others for sure. It's very good.

Now say you're sorry to Kenny and be friends. He was trying to help you.

[kenyc]

...

Now say you're sorry to Kenny and be friends. He was trying to help you.

:) Not necessary, really :)

KAC

[Avi]

1st and 3rd image are good...
I like the focus on the beeds on the 3rd image...

Avi