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mukund2
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 02:54
Full EXIF data is available in the property of the photo.

C&C are welcome.

#1
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x29/mukund2/CRW_7812.jpg

#2
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x29/mukund2/CRW_7858.jpg

#3
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x29/mukund2/CRW_7878.jpg

#4
http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x29/mukund2/CRW_7880.jpg

Riverlander
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 03:54
Some difficult subjects there (mainly becaue of the light associated with fog etc) but I think you have done very well
#1 Just needs a real POI -- something on the road?
#2 I would like to see the people in the fore ground just alittle more towards the centre. Bad luck about the sky.
#3 Maybe a tighter crop on the cleared area which is the POI
#4 Good shutter speed -- just needs beter light.

Good subjects -- difficult times to get jaw droppers.

RedHot
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 21:09
I suggest turning down your saturation in #2 #3 and #4. The light green area in the middle of #3 is almost glowing! :rolleyes:

shannyD
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 21:10
I suggest turning down your saturation in #2 #3 and #4. The light green area in the middle of #3 is almost glowing! :rolleyes:

agreed. but other than that.. i think that they are all pretty darn cool.
shannon

Jim G
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 21:33
I quite like #4... the oversaturated greens in #2 and #3 are a bit nasty, though! #3 looks radioactive ;)

I like the concept in #1 but somehow.. maybe too much road in it? Not quite sure what bugs me about that one.

#2 is a gorgeous viewpoint.

kevie
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 21:46
Yeah #1 would look great with a subject of some kind as the POI(point of interest)
dont know if its the whole web thing but they seem really over sharpened but again i blame the web for that not you. :)

doidinho
18th of September 2007 (Tue), 23:12
I too like photo #1; however, as others have mentioned it is lacking a point of focus. Depending on where and what the point of focus would be a bit less of the road might improve the photo as well.

IMO photos #2 and #3 have way too much color saturation and do not look natural. Photo #2 also looks flat and does not have the depth of field it could have; I do not have an answer for this.

Photo # 4 is not as interresting as photo #1 could been; however I would say it is the best of the lot.

Beautiful location, where exactly is it?

kevindar
19th of September 2007 (Wed), 00:34
you need to crop all of them. 4 would work the best. get rid of the ground. the sky in 2 and 3 detracts greatly from the image and is not necessary. 1, I am not sure what it is a pic of.

mukund2
20th of September 2007 (Thu), 05:19
I thank all of you for taking out time and giving your feedback which is really helpful.