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larsespen
19th of July 2004 (Mon), 14:14
What do You think??

http://www.skreifiske.com/images/AquaDiGio.jpg

/Lars

NJPete
19th of July 2004 (Mon), 14:49
I like the concept, but a few things stand out to me. The first, in terms of composition, is that at the bottom of the image there are some "lighter" areas that appear to be reflections. These reflections distracted me from the "product". The second item is that its somewhat difficult to see the label, and from a marketing standpoint, its very important to see what you are selling.

NJPete