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RinkRat
19th of July 2004 (Mon), 20:10
Camera Model Name: Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Shooting Date/Time: 7/19/2004 8:32:11 PM
Shooting Mode: Manual
Tv( Shutter Speed ): 1/5
Av( Aperture Value ): 6.3
Metering Mode: Center-weighted averaging
ISO Speed: 800
Lens: 18.0 - 55.0 mm
Focal Length: 53.0 mm
Image Quality: Fine
Flash: Off
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: AI Focus AF
Parameters: Contrast +1
Sharpness +1
Color saturation +1
Color tone Normal
Color Space: sRGB

This is a 3" carving I experimented with. (The cats wanted nothing to do with posing tonight)

http://mysite.verizon.net/vze75feo/Drebel/Angel.jpg

Big_B
20th of July 2004 (Tue), 03:49
A couple of comments. The first thing I noticed was that its not in focus. Secondly it might be improved if you tried a more interesting angle. Perhaps shooting up towards her face rather then being level with her. However this may be difficult on a 3" model :)

RinkRat
20th of July 2004 (Tue), 06:56
A couple of comments. The first thing I noticed was that its not in focus. Secondly it might be improved if you tried a more interesting angle. Perhaps shooting up towards her face rather then being level with her. However this may be difficult on a 3" model :)

It is a bit "fuzzy", isn't it? :)

I'll mess with the angles of the angel a bit tonight.

I was sitting in a chair next to the end table that the angel was sitting on, so my angles were a bit limited.

Angels, Angles...which is which again? :)

Thanks.

JohnEBongo
20th of July 2004 (Tue), 07:56
The left shoulder is a little blown out and the detail of the carving is lost. I like the overall cast of the picture though.