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Sgouz
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 13:36
Hi there.
Here are a few pics I took today, I like them but am still very new to photography and would like some feedback to make future shots better.
Thanks
-Steve

http://members.rogers.com/infocus/flower.jpg
http://members.rogers.com/infocus/flower2.jpg

arogop
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 14:49
The pictures actual seem very nice. One thing you might try is with the second one to narrow the depth of field. The effect of that would be to make the background more out of focus so you do not draw attention away from the flower.

sGu
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 15:04
composition wise, first one needs more work, the leaf on top and 1/4 of another flower at the bottom don't really help here, instead it distracts viewer's focus point.

second one is much better at framing, however, i agree with arogop, less DOF would blur the background, throw all the messy elements out of focus, so viewer can focus on the flower itself.

Sgouz
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 15:52
What settings would I change to adjust the DOF?

sGu
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 16:04
aperture, you need to wide open aperture, so the smaller the number, the wider aperture would be, hence more background blur, also known as bokeh.

http://gu.smugmug.com/photos/6165991-L.jpg

this is what i took trying to throw background out of focus, so as less distraction as possible. I know there are not the most glamourous flowers out there, neither is the shot, just to give you an idea what it would look like.

Sgouz
21st of July 2004 (Wed), 17:53
thanks for the advice, can't wait to give it a try.