trying something different

[cl photos]

Let me know what you think. I was going for an older grainy look.

[Shimpu]

I like the composition. I don't like the amount of grain/noise. Looks very messy to me.

[AlphaChicken]

I kinda like the noise effect. It adds the mood you were going for, thats for sure. I dont like the hat. One, its cropped out, and two the placement is off. I think it would do well moved back a little and the bottle moved forward a tad?