Does This Image Work??

[Banksy]

Thought i would try and have a go at a silhouet, but im not sure how it has come out so i thought i would let the pros tell me :).

I have tried to get a Harris Hawk flying to the glove.

All Comments welcome as i which to advance in the photography world.

Many Thanks

Matt

Not sure if this is under the right category??

[canonloader]

Looks like a good shot, but it needs to be bigger. :)

[Banksy]

This image has been cropped as i didnt like the original becase there was to much background.

Heres the original.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q12/sharandys/IMG_0091.jpg

Thanks for the comment

Matt

[canonloader]

I think the original has more impact. :)

[Pete]

I like the effect. Try cropping off the bottom to where that line goes across and see what that looks like.

[Banksy]

Should i of zoomed in more on the Person & Bird cover more of the photo?

[Pete]

Should i of zoomed in more on the Person & Bird cover more of the photo?

No.. You don't need to. I like the idea of the freedom of the sky. You've exposed it perfectly, so use it. It's where the bird belongs, after all.

[Banksy]

No.. You don't need to. I like the idea of the freedom of the sky. You've exposed it perfectly, so use it. It's where the bird belongs, after all.

Thanks for the comments Pete i aint one to question the pros :)

Thanks Again

Matt

[Cooper911]

I really like the second shot with the expance of sky.

[woody60]

Hi banksey , i would have cropped it more like this , so that the eye starts on the man and bird then moves to the sky , good shot though , nice one .

[Banksy]

Thanks for the comment its all a learning curve for me as i am still a amature.

I like the idea of the bird flying to the glove on the side of the pic not in the center.

Its a women but we wont tell her that HEHE.

Thanks again

[rw2]

I also like the crop that Woody60 did. You may want to turn on Image editing OK so that with future pics people can give you ideas by showing you with your pictures they have modified.

[Banksy]

I also like the crop that Woody60 did. You may want to turn on Image editing OK so that with future pics people can give you ideas by showing you with your pictures they have modified.

Didnt realise there was an option for that, I have now changed it. More than welcome for people to edit my photos. I can only learn by members doing this!!

Matt

[woody60]

OOps i apologise to the lady in question . Remember were all still learning .

[Lawrie B]

Hi Matt

I like the idea that you were trying to get Here is my edited version.

I hope you like it.

[Banksy]

Hi Matt

I like the idea that you were trying to get Here is my edited version.

I hope you like it.

Yeah i like it, i think (prob just my opinion) when it comes to a silhouet's i like the main point to be on the side not in the middle of the photo, in this case the person and bird.

Thanks Again

Matt

[aligater]

My slant on things,nice shot by the way.

[Banksy]

I really like what you have done with the image, what sort of software have you used to darken the image and add a hint of black to the clouds??

Thats one thing i need to learn is how to use software to enhance my photos, is there any recommendtions?

Matt

[aligater]

Hi Matt,
PS2 to clone out the plane vapour then DPP, - brightness, + contrast, + saturation,crop and sharpen a touch.

[Caleb]

Im in favor of Lawrie's cropping.......great shot banksey !