Black kiss

[vafa]

Here is a shot titled “Black Kiss”
How do you rate it? Any idea to improve?
Your comments and ideas are highly appreciated.

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vafa


http://www.bytephoto.com/photopost/data/500/2108Picture_191-1-med.jpg?6035

[SWPhotoImaging]

a very strange sculpture

[ijohnson]

It would be much better if the background wasn't so overexposed. much better. Even the tops of some of their heads are blown.

[Meerkat17]

I agree its too overexposed. It might have been better if you had included the first two heads as it would have eliminated the background which does nothing for the shot - also, perhaps if your were further to the right or left to create more of an angle to the image.

You could shoot off lots of shots with this and experiment with it, its the only positive the only suggestion I can give.

David

[rick barclay]

You should go back and shoot again when the light is more favorable.

[vafa]

How, when I'm 400 Km away. Find a PS based solution.
vafa

[rick barclay]

Get closer if you have to. Find a way. That's what makes the difference between a picture appearing in the National Geopraphic
or appearing here on these forums.