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dputz
1st of October 2007 (Mon), 11:27
Shot this for a review/editorial on his latest book, Rant. C&C welcomed!

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m172/dputz1/IMG_7416.jpg

in the issue, it turned out to be a cut-out, surrounded by text.

...and the setup...in the hallway outside the newspaper office.:lol:
http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m172/dputz1/IMG_7418.jpg

1DMkIIN w/ Sigma 10-20 @ f8
1 Canon SL 430EX w/ Hama hotshoe-PC adapter
1 Vivitar 285HV w/ Wien XL peanut OS (superclamped to the desk)

led hed
1st of October 2007 (Mon), 11:52
the shadow behind the book is distracting.

djharmonix
1st of October 2007 (Mon), 13:48
1- awesome shot, i really like the concept.
2-remove the shadow.
3- try to expose the right side of the book as much as the left as it shows the nicest part of the design.

very nice work!

Quarantine
1st of October 2007 (Mon), 13:53
i like the colors on the book, but the shadow should be edited out