its my turn, business card for crit

[cdmonkey]

Any comments on the following would be great. it would be a double sided card.

thanks
Carl

[HaroldC3]

The font size for your information seems too small and I don't care for the font choice for "photography" on the front. Why not the same font as the back?

[Scorpio]

I think the text contrast needs to be increased, especially printed the size of a business card, it might be a bit hard to read. On the first one I'd either darken the background or the drop shadow. On the second, I'd darken the text; particularly the contact info, which I think is the hardest to read, since it's virtually the same color as the sheet below it.

++ on the previous mention of contact info font size, as well.

Hope that helps!

[tracknut]

I don't get why this is two-sided. It looks like two completely different cards, both geared toward shooting babies and possibly weddings. The cards look like completely different designs, and don't go together (nor are both needed, IMO).

Dave

[cdmonkey]

Thanks for all the comments, I will make the changes later an repost.

The one side was to highlight I do wedding and the other portraits/ children photos, if this wont work as one card then I will do them as seperate cards. I was thinking that I could give the cards to someone who wants shots of their kids but at the same time advertise that I do weddings.

Thanks again.
Carl

[neil85]

maybe make the font size SLIGHTLY larger ... ?

also im not a fan of having "tel" & "email" on it.

especially since you dont say "website" before the website address. to me it (saying tel & email) just clutters it up.

otherwise i think its good

[tracknut]

especially since you dont say "website" before the website address. to me it (saying tel & email) just clutters it up.


...and "name:" in front of your name... ? :)

Dave

[cdmonkey]

yeah, totatly agree they will be gone in the revisions.

thanks
Carl