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midav
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 11:31
Any suggestions / improvements on this design? My wife and I would like to keep the color theme at least. She likes the design - it's clean.

Does it look ok or does it need additional work?

http://www.vadimgurevich.com/card_front.jpg
http://www.vadimgurevich.com/card_back.jpg

Coastal
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 11:51
I like it...
I feel "satisfaction guaranteed" while a bit cliche, sounds a bit more professional than "pay only if satisfied"

midav
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 12:05
I like it...
I feel "satisfaction guaranteed" while a bit cliche, sounds a bit more professional than "pay only if satisfied"

makes sense

Coastal
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 12:08
but the card is legible, simple, and gets the point across effectively... Good work

DanC922
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 16:26
"Restore Damaged Photos" should be changed to "Damaged Photo Restoration" to fit with the tense of the other services.

trantz
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 21:26
to beat an already dead horse, and revisit the car comparison... when I see anything like 'satisfaction guaranteed', i think about a Used Car Lot. You never see anything like that at a high-end car-dealer or place of business. That's just my thought, I think the card works, but I would loose that last claim at the end.

rhys
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 21:34
I like it but would lose the last bit "pay only if satisfied".

Coastal
5th of October 2007 (Fri), 21:34
I was debating that after I posted my advice...

I decided that I would put " Amazing Results" if anything... or nothing at all

jtown
6th of October 2007 (Sat), 00:11
Just looks like text on a card.

neil85
6th of October 2007 (Sat), 17:51
im guessing the thats the front & back of the card ...

i agree with the pay only if satisfied part id leave it off.

also i like that its nice and simple. reminds me of the ones i get at work from vendors. The simple ones always please me and the guys who try to put a TON on the car just seem cluttered. almost like it reflects the person ???

you get business cards from people at the casinos in vegas and they are simple, with less on them then this.

i have the card to the front show production manager at the WYNN las vegas.

their cards are a copper/brown/gold like the building, have WYNN embossed on the upper 2/3s of the card and then just the person name, phone,email & title on it. nice and simple

midav
8th of October 2007 (Mon), 08:48
Thank you all for suggestions. I'm also a fan of simple cards, that's why I have only text on it. I tried adding a logo next to the name - but it doesn't look right.
Anyway, I removed the last slogan (Pay Only if Satisfied) from the back of the card. I might (will) update it when we start offering photo services as well.

Thanks again for great feedback.

http://www.vadimgurevich.com/card_front.jpg

http://www.vadimgurevich.com/card_back.jpg

Fotoscapes
8th of October 2007 (Mon), 11:26
It's nice...your color choices are subtle to the eye.

Joe