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vafa
30th of July 2004 (Fri), 21:56
Here is a photo of sunflower through my camera's lens.

Your comments and ideas are highly appreciated.

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Sailor Don
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 08:14
The blue background looks so uniform, it appears to be edited. There is no variation in tone or lighting. Makes it look artificial.

Having said that, the flower is excellent. Good exposure, good color, good focus, good DOF, maybe a bit more flower with less severe cropping would be good.

redbutt
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 09:02
Was this processed at all...sharpening? Just curious.

gixxerjasen
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 11:57
I don't know if it's just me but the interesting part is the top left where the contrast of the colors are however my eye keeps getting pulled to the less interesting dark bottom right side. I'm not sure what would fix it though, if that part could be lighter or the crop different, perhaps even a little tighter or wider?

rick barclay
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 13:22
The more I look at it, the more I like it. Sunflowers are tall, so the
blue in the corner there could be real. The dark corner doesn't bother
me at all. Quite the opposite.

Sendide
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 17:55
nice shot but too saturated colors and overcontrasted for me (I might be wrong though)
regards
Khalid

Big_B
6th of August 2004 (Fri), 18:25
Vafa, I like the way that you often take a different perspective on photos to the rest of us. It may not be to everyones tast but I like this one - it works for me.

BB

PhotosGuy
7th of August 2004 (Sat), 10:47
The oversaturation gives it a great poster effect. If I was you, I'd also select & oversharpen the center of the flower, too.

vafa
7th of August 2004 (Sat), 20:36
If I was you, I'd also select & oversharpen the center of the flower, too.


Tahnks Frank, would you please explain how do it in PS?
vafa

rick barclay
7th of August 2004 (Sat), 21:22
Use the lasso tool to selectively sharpen, adjust levels, contrast, and anything else you want to do. Make a layer for each thing you adjust.
Use your imagination, Vafa.

PhotosGuy
7th of August 2004 (Sat), 23:18
If you select something, (it doesn't make ANY difference which selection tool you use, & some are hidden under the others), you're telling PS that you only want to work on that area.

Rick has it right, but let me put it in order for you:

First, make a duplicate layer. It will be the active layer, until you click on another one (don't!).
2nd, select the area you want to work with. You can use the Lasso tool. I like the Polygonal Lasso tool 'cause I think it's easier to work with.
3rd, do your sharpening.
4th, you'll have to de-select in order to work with the entire image again. Hit Ctrl-D

I really suggest that you look up Selections, & selection tools in the Help file. There's a whole lot that I haven't told you. For instance, you can add to & subtract from them, as well as save them.

Have fun!

vafa
8th of August 2004 (Sun), 03:22
Thanks for your comments and technical helps.
vafa

Molydood
8th of August 2004 (Sun), 15:03
Vafa, I've seen a lot of your images now, and generally speaking, your shooting style is interesting, but not to my tastes
However, I really like this picture, and as somebody else comented, you do tend to shoot that little bit different to others and its refreshing. nice work.

ajax
8th of August 2004 (Sun), 16:02
Do you ever see a photo and think "wow, that looks like something I would have taken?"

That was this photo. I'm totally addicted to taking photos of the sunflowers at my bus stop in the morning--I'm drawn to tight shots, and/or I love to crop them in a similar manner.

Ergo, I like it! :D

I'm on a laptop, so hesitate to critique the color intensity--it looks a bit over-saturated.