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rya794
2nd of August 2004 (Mon), 00:24
Let me now what you think. Thanks.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/rya794/Colt45.jpg
300d with 100mm macro and a 550 ex.
taken at 1/200th at f/10. [/img]
c0ntr0lz
2nd of August 2004 (Mon), 01:06
gun nose maybe a little far to the left
setup like that it makes it hard to focus on one thing
like but may need a bit more contrast, maybe a bit more light
may want to lay it out like this
http://ctrlzproduction.com/images/weapons/huntingbw3.jpg
make the object tell a story
Andy_T
4th of August 2004 (Wed), 06:48
I think the diferent subjects are strewn over too wide an area, so it's difficult to judge proportions. I'd like to see more of the gun.
The reflection also tends to make the photo more complicated ... my eyes hunt for a center here.
Doesn't work for me ... do you have other shots of this motive?
Best regards,
Andy
totochoi
4th of August 2004 (Wed), 10:39
I like the idea of the gun an bullets and I like the depth of field.. but try to put the main object in the middle. In this case maybe the gun itself, and try avoid the blur bullet right in front of the picture. :lol: but good job tho....
Penguin_101_1
4th of August 2004 (Wed), 10:54
I like it but I would like to see the barrel in the middle of the pic. Maybe not so much ammo. It is still a good pic.
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