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jcjames
13th of October 2007 (Sat), 08:03
Inspired by some b&w professional photographers........c&c welcomed. ;)

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Dchemist
13th of October 2007 (Sat), 10:56
Good shot. You might want to fill more of the image with the still life. There is a lot of empty black space for my taste. Dennis

robgr85
13th of October 2007 (Sat), 11:12
as dchemist said, there is a bit too much of the black space above the subject...

jcjames
13th of October 2007 (Sat), 18:03
as dchemist said, there is a bit too much of the black space above the subject...

Dear all, thanks for the good feedback! ;)

jcjames
3rd of November 2007 (Sat), 18:50
;) another shot in colours. c&c welcomed.

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Titus213
3rd of November 2007 (Sat), 20:53
Well, how about a compromise? I actually like the first one but it needs a bit more light and a bit more DOF for my tastes.

Avi
5th of November 2007 (Mon), 06:20
i'll prefer the b/w in comparision with color..
and I agree that it needs some contrast to the image..

Avi

Yiskah
6th of November 2007 (Tue), 10:07
I thought I would prefer the B&W, but I like the color one better:)

flumpki
6th of November 2007 (Tue), 13:44
I prefer the b&w version, but I think it could use some more contrast and a bit of a crop. I played with it a bit in PS, but as you don't have 'image editing ok' I won't post it to the forum.

jcjames
6th of November 2007 (Tue), 18:57
;) Thanks for the feedback, would try out the suggestion next for b&w shots. Cheers