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luannf1980
16th of October 2007 (Tue), 23:04
I shot this wedding on friday and had to upload to the computer. so I havent done any PP work besides turning them b/w. But these few shots both the brides mother and aunt, and my MIL have bought <through MPIX> they both seemed to rave over these shots. SO I thought id ask for c and c on them please..good bad and evil :evil:. I had all of 15mins outside to take shots in just about darkness.. and this was also a *gift* for them...so again..should i lower my price or am i in the correct direction? lol
thanks for looking if you are..
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r16/luannf1980/200.jpg


http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r16/luannf1980/137.jpg


http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r16/luannf1980/15.jpg


http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r16/luannf1980/46.jpg


well be honest... I think the last photo is the wrong one..but I am going to leave it up anyhow.. I have a shot like this with her actually smiling and it is slightly darker
luannf1980
16th of October 2007 (Tue), 23:46
16lookers and no advice....dayum are they THAT bad..tim where are you??? lol
scot079
16th of October 2007 (Tue), 23:48
not a wedding photog, (yet) but these look a little flat. try playing with levels in PS. Good composition and exposure. :-)
Chris
16th of October 2007 (Tue), 23:54
Patience, it hasn't even been an hour and there will be many more lookers than commentors
MarkAnthonyPhotography
17th of October 2007 (Wed), 00:50
being relativly new, only 1 year as a paid photographer, 1 does nothing for me. Great capture of emotion on 2. Those are always a crowd pleaser. Not big on the mirror shot. Last one needed some fill light on the background. looks like the groom is part of the background. Just my 2 cents. And it ain't worth much! lol. Just keep shooting and don't be afraid to try new things.
cccp145
17th of October 2007 (Wed), 01:31
Practice makes perfect!
jillybean
17th of October 2007 (Wed), 10:08
#1- Is it slightly OOF?- remove the vase of flowers behind her- get rid of the elec plate on wall
#2- great candid
#3- I like the pose- seems a little flat- could be a real keeper after some pp
#4- I really do not like her expression- need more ambient light to show some background.