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LaurentiuB
9th of August 2004 (Mon), 05:51
I feel that something is mising. What do you think ?
http://laurentiu-bogdan.fotopic.net/p6635460.html
PhotosGuy
9th of August 2004 (Mon), 10:02
Nice pastel colors. Did you consider dragging the back of the boat a bit to the right? :lol:
Leighow
10th of August 2004 (Tue), 09:59
Yeah.. these boat shots are tough to do well.
There is not a lot you could have done with these elements as is. But it seems to be a bit too dead on . A more sideview might have helped a bit.
The mood is not quite strong enough.
While the sky draws us in, that the boat does not help much. Compositionally, the boat overpowers the sky, jams itslef into a narrow space, and pushes us to the sand.
I think that smoething of smaller scale might have been better. With more attendtion paid to the rule of thirds, etc.
Sendide
10th of August 2004 (Tue), 10:54
I would increase the contrast and decrease the brightness, then desatureate the colors, monochrome sould look much better, neverthless, it's a nice shot
regads
Khalid
LaurentiuB
11th of August 2004 (Wed), 07:49
Thank's, I will try to play a little bit with it and I'll come back
sGu
11th of August 2004 (Wed), 08:04
a bit dark to me too, also increase contrast also possibly dynamic range
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