October 27

[Tragerman]

I shot seconds to Bob Lawrence on the 27th. Here are a few:

1.http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216346311-M.jpg
2. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216346627-M.jpg
3. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216346935-M.jpg
4. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216346982-M.jpg
5. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216347116-M.jpg
6. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216347407-M.jpg
7. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216348140-M.jpg
8. http://tragerman.smugmug.com/photos/216348224-M.jpg

[mezorn26]

Pics 1,7 need a little more cropping IMO, also all of the shots look a little dull


the last three are neat shots, but it looks like all of your shots had some focusing issues.

[Niraj]

i dont see any focussing issues with the shots... i like how you've gotten down to the right eye level for shot 7... pic1 definitely needs some cropping, the lady with the open back dress at the top, just looks a little awkward to me :S

[wizard13]

Agree with the previous two posts. Crop shot one and maybe add some more contrast to a couple shots. The eye level shots with the little girls came out nicely.

[Tragerman]

Thanks all, I see where you're coming from.

-Mickey