A girl...

[carseasoncity]

Just playing around with some different processing. This is just one of many from a whole day of shooting with a friend. Thoughts?
Brandi

[ssidiv3r]

I would say maybe add a little more color to her skin, try to get her face sharper or more in focus and ask her what she has in her mouth (right cheek). composision and the lighting look good :)

[IainB]

With this colouring, the gloves are not attractive, and make me think she was in the process of cleaning... Could you selective colour the gloves?

[carseasoncity]

I would say maybe add a little more color to her skin, try to get her face sharper or more in focus and ask her what she has in her mouth (right cheek). composision and the lighting look good :)

With this colouring, the gloves are not attractive, and make me think she was in the process of cleaning... Could you selective colour the gloves?

I was trying something different with the coloring (washed out vintage look). In the original the face is sharp, but with the technique (Old Toy Camera action) it gives a blurry look. And she doesn't have anything in her mouth...those are her cheeks.

I did selective color the gloves. They were bright green (think 1970's tupperware) and the only pair we had. :) But that was how they came out, I couldn't get them to look white or a light color. I'm not sure of the best way to do that.

Thanks for the comments!
Brandi

[Stav_98]

I like it as it is, nice washed look to it.