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flashLM
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 02:43
#1 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/flashhonda/Bcard_11.jpg
#2 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/flashhonda/Bcard_11a.jpg
#3 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/flashhonda/card1.jpg

brenno
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 04:52
I'd say number 2 out of these.

PhotosGuy
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 09:03
1 or 2, but no link to a website? I'd have to ask myself why you aren't showing your work?

midlife_crisis
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 12:28
1 or 2, but no link to a website? I'd have to ask myself why you aren't showing your work?

I agree, and drop the gmail email.

number 2 looks better to me, I'd be inclined to line up all the text

tinkan
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 12:36
To use the letters FLM next to the word photography makes it look at first glance as though you've got the word film wrong. Is that how to spell modelling?

sevillafox
7th of December 2007 (Fri), 12:37
I think you had better watch out for your bleeds and font sizes. I think some of those fonts are a little small to see even here. And, some of your words are a little close to getting cut off. Get a website too.

flashLM
8th of December 2007 (Sat), 04:07
Thanks for your comments, much appreciated... will work on the font and the gmail...
Regards

Familiaphoto
8th of December 2007 (Sat), 10:49
The size of the cards seems large to me. I also agree with the comment that at first look FLM can be taken as a mis-spelling of FILM. I like #2 the best and yes, get rid of the gmail account and get a custom url, even if it only points to a SmugMug or Zenfolio account.

adam8080
8th of December 2007 (Sat), 14:07
I also like #2 the best. That text is going to be tiny and hard to read!