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DocZ
5th of September 2004 (Sun), 15:11
Thanks for all the comments on my first two tries. Here are a few more for your perusal.
http://www.bobzct.com/Photos/Dock.jpg
http://www.bobzct.com/Photos/Vase.jpg
http://www.bobzct.com/Photos/Traps.jpg
http://www.bobzct.com/Photos/Fog.jpg
jim jam
5th of September 2004 (Sun), 16:36
Some interesting shots the first few have interesting lines the last one has a nice quiet mood to it.
Radtech1
5th of September 2004 (Sun), 21:58
Sorry Doc,
I think that it is back to the practice range for you. I don't care for the first one for a couple of reasons, primarily, that blue looks way oversaturated. Lighting is a bit harsh, I might have tightened down the aperture a stop or so. Secondarily, that boat out in the horizon has been cut in half. There is no need for that.
Second shot is okay but there is not much to it. Except that needs to be rotated counterclockwise about one degree.
Third shot is perhaps the most interesting one you've got, but Wow! what a tough subject. I like the colors of the cages, background is kind of suckey though. Shows promise perhaps a different approach. Oh! Just like the first one, it's oversaturated.
Fourth shot is the one that I like the best. As mentioned it is nice and moody despite being a little bit generic. Although the horizon is pretty much hidden in the mist, I get a feeling that this also needs to be rotated. All of the masts seemed to be pointing just a smidgen counterclockwise from true vertical.
Don't let the criticism gets you down. It looks like to have access to some nice scenery, now you have to do is go back and find the photographs that are hiding there.
Rad
rickc
6th of September 2004 (Mon), 07:30
The last one would be my choice also. I didn't notice the slight tilt to the boat masts until mentioned above. For me, the other pictures seemed to suffer composition or cropping problems.
rich..
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