One more sample of our Wedding invitation - probably the final one

[lukasgunar]

Hello guys,
as half of our family didn't like our previous invitation that much (link to the thread (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=419537)), we've rather spent half day on creating another one.
Please feel free to give us your feedback.

Many thanks.

lukas&ivana

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s43/lukasgunar/preforum.jpg

[nvrl8]

Perfect...I definitely like this one the best! You guys are adorable!!

[spphoto]

I like the other one better, this one the text along the bottom is competing with the grass, so it's hard to read.

[symes]

I have a couple of suggestions:

I would put just a small white almost completely see through bar across the bottom and put the writing on that of having it compete...

or ditch the other two photos on the left and put the writing there...they are all stunning photos that really show off your personality...

Cheers,

[lukasgunar]

Perfect...I definitely like this one the best! You guys are adorable!!
Many thanks ;-)

I like the other one better, this one the text along the bottom is competing with the grass, so it's hard to read.
Thank you for your feedback as well. We were struggling on how to make the text more visible and hopefully once we print it out it won't be that hardly readable.
I have a couple of suggestions:

I would put just a small white almost completely see through bar across the bottom and put the writing on that of having it compete...

or ditch the other two photos on the left and put the writing there...they are all stunning photos that really show off your personality...

Cheers,

Many thanks Symes for your suggestions.
We've tried your second suggestion, though it didn't work as those 2 pictures didn't fit into left down corner of the picture. But the text was of course much better readable on the right hand side.

I'm not really sure if I understand what do you mean by your first suggestion. If you have time, would you mind to adjust the picture accordingly?

Many thanks

lukas&ivana

[mcruzn]

I love this one so much more. Try changing all of the writing to black with a white shadow. That might make it stand out more. Otherwise, I love it. I did a similar save the date card and thank you card for my sisters wedding. I think they came out great.

[mcruzn]

I thought I would share my work and give you some ideas for thank you cards. Hope you enjoy.

[mcruzn]

At looking at your invitation again. I would bring the two photos on the right down a bit and enlarge both of your names. I would also move them over (away from your hats) and make them larger. If you move the two pictures down, it will give you more room to play with the position of your names.

[lukasgunar]

At looking at your invitation again. I would bring the two photos on the right down a bit and enlarge both of your names. I would also move them over (away from your hats) and make them larger. If you move the two pictures down, it will give you more room to play with the position of your names.


Great Thanks to all your suggestions and also for sharing your card. It's awesome.
Thank you.

lukas&ivana