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tonyr0584
16th of December 2007 (Sun), 23:04
Sun popped out for these shots..... shortly after the rain set in.
CC appreciated.

1.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_237w.jpg

2.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_247w.jpg

3.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_256w.jpg

4.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_068web.jpg

5.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_268w.jpg

6.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_275w.jpg

tonyr0584
16th of December 2007 (Sun), 23:40
A few more.

7.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_332w.jpg

8.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_336w.jpg

9.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_345w.jpg

10.
http://www.trirgraphics.com/potn/pj72_462w.jpg

flareak
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 01:00
i think you need to be using a fill flash outdoors
4 is a nice shot
i dont particularly like # 2 though. just the composition and the angle. and the leaves make it really cluttered
i feel that your pictures have a lot of negative space in them. try filling it up a bit more
gj though

amironsi
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 01:26
that little girl is so swwet... good work focusing on her.

i can't say any picture is good
they are all good.
No. 1 is so so cool
no. 4 IS WONDERFUL
no. 5 gr8 group picture
no. 7 is one of the best maid of honors pictures i have ever seen

rocker83
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 04:25
2 is just way too busy...but you can't really help it from that angle...
3..is cute, but that darn stop sign really draws my eye away

but they are all very good :)

nursek
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 15:08
1. good, but not great
2. it might be me, but i don't like the composition of this picture
3. i like this one, but not the background because it's distracting
4. nice!
5. this picture would have worked more if everyone in the group was making a silly face! i wasn't sure if this picture should be serious or goofy
6. a tighter crop would work better, but overall good
7.the bridesmaid on the right in #7 has her eye closed...consider tossing it out
9. again, i didn't know whether this picture should be serious or goofy...the groom's wide open mouth takes away from this shot
10. cute!

take my criticism with a grain of salt!

tonyr0584
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 15:51
Thanks for everyone's comments/opinions. Yea, I've got some cropping to do and clonning out to do. I was in a hurry to get these up for you guys to take a peek.

viper7
17th of December 2007 (Mon), 23:00
Thanks for sharing your nice Images ,,, in First images i would have clown out the grass and also the bricks line near at bottom, for same pattern as above .... if you dont mind i can i download your images to try out what i mean ...