PVD:The Wall That Jack Built

[bryanj87]

Taken in Providence, RI last month. It's an exposed wall of an old building that is being rehabbed. I thought the mix of textures was interesting. Thoughts and feedback welcome, and thanks for looking.

http://www.bryanbzdula.com/newpics/albums/userpics/Providence-21.jpg

[David Saunders II]

Some small critiques: Change the angle so the sign on the left isn't in the shot but the gray block wall (and surrounding white frame) is. Increase aperture a bit to try to get some more detail, or increase sharpness. Lastly, it looks like you took this on a cloudy day. Try during a sunny day during 1-hour after sunrise or 1-hour before sunset to get a nice warmer feel to it (unless of course your intention was to show desolation/urban decline).

[GDHugh]

The numerous textures as interesting almost an abstract painting though it could benefit from more contrast provided by different light source as stated above. Nice job.