Bored So Did a Photoshoot

[juicyfruit]

hey guys i did a photoshoot the other day. let me know what you guys think of these. im still pretty new to this and some constructive criticism would be nice. :D


1
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5480.jpg
2
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5487.jpg
3
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5489.jpg
4
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5512.jpg
5
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5523.jpg
6
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5540.jpg



7
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g245/jonrwongusana/IMG_5597.jpg

[CombatCamera13]

Number two, I think if the camera was level, location was changed (it just seems off balance with the building to the right with the numbers) and I wouldn't have the driver in the shot.
Number five, would it look better with more detail in the hood?
Number six, I don't like how the roof fades into the sky and i don't like how you can see the tire from the other car next to it.
And number seven is my favorite. It does seem like it has a wb issue though. But I do like the angle. I would watch your backgrounds though. See how the garage door kinda sits on the roof?

[PhotosGuy]

Nice variety. Can't say I'm too thrilled about black & white cars on a white background on a gray day? Some more color somewhere would be nice.
I kind of like #7.
#6 is losing the highlights in the sky & the wheels are just the opposite - losing the details in the black. Got PS? You can level out the exposure using a selection & a Layer mask. See post #9; PS Elements in Post # 14
A question about sky (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=338140)

[Cr4zYH3aD]

i like the black bmw

[Dave.H]

Why does everyone make license plates unreadable on the web? I don't get it. Is there something I am missing? I mean, everyday I drive down the road hundreds of people can see my license plate. Its not like its a secret. Just a question I have been wondering about, makes me feel like I am missing something cause I think it takes away from the photo.

[frzndaqiri]

To me: It's a privacy thing. The more info you give a person, the more they can get. So driving down the road, you've got a license plate. Here, you've got the plate, and possibly an IP address, name, and any other details he might have let slip on the board. Odds are, he uses a similar username else where. Do a little digging and you've got even more from other forums, sharing sites, etc.

I try to still make it pleasing to the photo when I take it out. Obviously, that's not his major concern here. It's general feedback he's looking for.

So it's limiting the information tied to yourself. And minor paranoia. ;)

[VorteC]

Hi there liquidgen. ;)

once again, nice photos. I like them, I think your TSX looks better than the others though ;)

[89AKurt]

Generally, the white car, white building, white sky thing is a personal choice, not mine.
The black car, white... is good IMO.
#2, details details, the concrete gutter interferes, should have not driven over it.
Not crazy about the exteme tilt, again my opinion.
For a city setting, you did fine.

[aridan]

#3 for me :)

[AmpedPhoto]

photos look good, about the lic plates...you went threw and spent the time blurring the plates but in shot 3 or 4 you shot them from the back and exposed all the plates....just pointing that out lol