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vafa
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 10:51
Here is a shot, which requested by subjects.
They seem satisfied.
How about you?
vafa


http://www.bytephoto.com/photopost/data/500/2108Picture_138-2-med.jpg?3249

Belmondo
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 11:01
I love this picture. What cooperative, happy looking subjects!

How did you light the shot?

Sailor Don
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 15:54
Vafa,

If it's satisfaction they wanted, your photo definitely says it.

Good multiple portrait.

rick barclay
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 19:59
Your best post by far, Vafa. Keep working like this.

c0ntr0lz
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 21:20
great work and a cute bunch

who10
12th of September 2004 (Sun), 21:44
Wonderful image, Vafa... absolutely my favorite of all your posts.

Beautiful work!

David

KO_300D
14th of September 2004 (Tue), 06:23
Colours, composition, crop, focus.... all spot on

Great shot - that's one for their parent's wall

Andy_T
14th of September 2004 (Tue), 15:18
This is a great picture!

Keep them coming' 8)

Best regards,
Andy

Cheese
14th of September 2004 (Tue), 16:55
That's a beautiful picture Vafa.

I hope you don't mind me making a few suggestions since you did place this in the critique forum.

1. There are four or five white dots on the right shoulder of the girl in the back, that attract my attention away from their beautiful faces. Can you clone these out?

2. There is also some background colour behind the girls hat that is a bit distracting. Could this be blurred a bit so it is not so evident.

3. I would crop a bit of the right hand side of the picture as it seems a bit off balance. This may be just how I am viewing it on my monitor.

These are just minor points on what is a lovely picture. I have seen some of the other pictures you have posted and you do so beautiful work.


Ron

vafa
14th of September 2004 (Tue), 22:20
Thanks for all encouragement and comments.
vafa