Portrait critique?

[brusselandsprout]

I was asked to take a picture of sisters as a bit of a favour

only did it in the living room with a cloth black background

what do you think

any suggestions for improvements

ta

roger

http://www.btinternet.com/~dedecker/portrait2.jpg

[mikesd]

I think it looks really good. The only thing I might play with woud be lowering the contrast just a bit to lose what little skin glare there is.

[brusselandsprout]

thanks

see what you mean might have to have play in PS

thanks again

roger

Quite pleased as it was my first attempt!!