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kaddafy
28th of December 2007 (Fri), 07:22
what do you think?
any c&c are welcome!!

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1456/jfontakitebc6.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9393/jfontakiteps8.jpg

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/1226/jfontakite2wv8.jpg

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/830/jfontakite4xw8.jpg

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6370/jfontakite6tk7.jpg

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/8461/kitemj0.jpg

slingshot rev
kaddafy
28th of December 2007 (Fri), 09:36
34 views and no one had nothing to say?
they are that bad?
namasste
28th of December 2007 (Fri), 11:38
Well I'm pretty sure you have to hit 100 views with no comments before complaining:lol::lol:.

Okay, here's my thoughts.. I LOVE the artistic nature of the shots as its very different than traditional images. Along those lines, the b/w conversion suits them well. I think you colors look a little off on the color shots and they all seem a bit dark to me. The first image is far and away the best imo as it reflects the activity and uses negative space very well since you have the kite and kit flyer balanced nicely. The darker image actually works well on this image.
khall
29th of December 2007 (Sat), 02:11
First shot is OK. Have to ask why tilt the pictures on the rest.
kaddafy
29th of December 2007 (Sat), 04:33
First shot is OK. Have to ask why tilt the pictures on the rest.


sorry but what do you mean with "tilt the pictures on the rest?"
wetclay
29th of December 2007 (Sat), 05:32
definitely the exposure hurts these images, but like the feel of them. I too wondered why you didn't use more of a horizontal horizon on some of these but I do understand trying different perspectives. The first is my fav and reminds me of how much I miss summer since this is an activity that I see a lot of in my area.
khall
29th of December 2007 (Sat), 18:42
Tilt means sloping position. The kite would look just as good with a straight horizon.
The first picture is no longer showing, have you removed it?
WxGuesser
29th of December 2007 (Sat), 19:12
do some selective coloring .. only have the kite colored...
kaddafy
30th of December 2007 (Sun), 06:58
Tilt means sloping position. The kite would look just as good with a straight horizon.
The first picture is no longer showing, have you removed it?


no i didn't removed it!
and thanks for the explanation
khall
30th of December 2007 (Sun), 11:25
The first picture is now coming up OK.