Long exp Fountian

[kawter2]

I was happy with this at first. Any sugestions?

http://kawter.hostrocket.com/long_exp/fount01b.JPG


TIA!!!

[blinking8s]

honestly...from an artistic point of view that class is SLOWLY drilling into me...baaaaaaad ass

now from my personal tastes...tyte...id like the see you aim a little higher on it though, get that complete arc in on the edge of the fountain

GREAT colors though

[Curos]

thats a very...very cool effect. i love overhead shots, also.

[blinking8s]

im starting to get upset with the lack of feedback in the forum....it gets worse each week

maybe the forum should be split up, between people that want to learn how to use a camera for personal use like family shots and stuff, and people that want to learn photography.

[neil_r]

The subtle colours are excellent. However I think the framing is too tight, I would like to see the top of the fountain and the central jet of water within the frame.

I really like the ripples on the water.

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[Molydood]

I think it's a good attempt, and my gripe is that with this sort of shot, I always like to see some part of the frame in sharp focus, to give the contrast and promote the sense of movement. Otherwise, it ends up just looking blurred. That's just my opinion, and others may well just see it as a very nice capture, which it probably is for a lot of people.
I DO like the picture though

[jazzman121]

I think its a great shot :)... for a minite i couldnt figure out what it was... but then i was like ahhh... but yea..

[Mitchkitter]

excellent shot, a bit wider <tiny> and it could make it perfect :)

EXIF data?

[gixxerjasen]

I agree with many of the posts here. At first my eye was searching for something crisp and clear for comparison, and that can only really be found at the edges. Also the broken arch seems to me a bit distracting as well.