Does this shot say anything to you??

[alistairf]

Took this shot a couple of weeks back when I was wondering about town - just wondered what you guys thought of it.

http://www.aflack.photosite.com/~photos/tn/395_1024.ts1094893711453.jpg

Cheers,
Ali

[mpaul73]

Took this shot a couple of weeks back when I was wondering about town - just wondered what you guys thought of it.

http://www.aflack.photosite.com/~photos/tn/395_1024.ts1094893711453.jpg

Cheers,
Ali

Stone work is kind of nice but other than that it doesn't really convey anything to me? There is no strong point of focus or lead for the eye except to jump back and forth between the pigeon and chimney stacks, and neither of them is very pleasing.

Sorry to sound negative but that is my honest opinion. Others might disagree with me!

Regards

Martin Paul.

[rickc]

Actually, I am in total agreement with Martin!

This picture has no focus point that I can see and no story to tell the viewer.

Sorry to sound so negative.

rich..

[alistairf]

thats fine! I really wasn't convinced it had anything going for it - just wanted to see if anyone thought likewise.

I guess I was trying to capture something of the way the pigeon on the right was looking - ready to pounce or something...

Back to the provebial drawing board it is then! Thanks for the comments - appreciated