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ElderberryEyes
13th of January 2008 (Sun), 19:05
This is my first time posting some pics....so let me see if it works. I'm open minded to your comments...thanks.

1.
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/elderberry_eyes/20392090313_0_ALB.jpg

2.
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/elderberry_eyes/71062948213_0_ALB.jpg

3.
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/elderberry_eyes/38837132313_0_ALB.jpg

4. yep...hand held...
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/elderberry_eyes/82538822313_0_ALB.jpg

5. now I know it's bright....wrong time of the day...but is the posing ok?
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p240/elderberry_eyes/36141190313_0_ALB.jpg
short5
13th of January 2008 (Sun), 19:21
Welcome to the forum. I like the last one best. The posing is good but I agree with your own critique of it being the wrong time of day.~Zane
Robert_Lay
13th of January 2008 (Sun), 20:52
This is my first time posting some pics....so let me see if it works. I'm open minded to your comments...thanks.


5. now I know it's bright....wrong time of the day...but is the posing ok?


To me the biggest thing wrong with the pose is that her hair has a tonal merger with the black background. Her hairline needs to be enhanced by a lighter background.
ElderberryEyes
14th of January 2008 (Mon), 00:33
Are there anymore critiques? I'm still a little new with photography....for me, these are my best shots. I've always admired the beauty in it....still trying to figure it out though. Thanks

Oh yeah....Thanks short5 for the welcome and thanks Robert....I see what you are talking about.
Binning
14th of January 2008 (Mon), 20:37
#3 is a good pose and composition. It doesn't look very sharp though... it may just be a PP issue. #5 could be a good shot, but the light seems harsh and the lines seem off. Bob's comments are very good. Keep shooting and thinking about how you can do it better.... you obviously have some good ideas.