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EdV
20th of January 2008 (Sun), 13:51
after spending one year hanging out on POTN! :D;):p

Image made in the ruins area of the Whitehall Parkway outside of Allentown, PA.

C&C would be appreciated.

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s1/EdV_02/009_1-1.jpg

BigBouncyBall
20th of January 2008 (Sun), 14:29
I like it - once you get some paint on the walls, and a front door it should be very nice!

EdV
20th of January 2008 (Sun), 16:14
Thanks, BBB. Are you willing to help me paint? :)

Lots of ruins in that area from the early years of the cement industry (1890s). This one really fascinates me.

rooeey
20th of January 2008 (Sun), 16:25
As they say in real estate....A renovators delight or room to improve.....

crayfish13
20th of January 2008 (Sun), 23:05
For a second I thought it was an old bus because your the roof. Cool shot.

EdV
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 05:32
For a second I thought it was an old bus because your the roof. Cool shot.

Thanks, crayfish. Glad you liked the image. I really think it is the remains of an old railroad car. The rail bed is now a very nice multi-purpose Rail-Trail.

BigBouncyBall
23rd of January 2008 (Wed), 04:04
yeh it's nice, though being critical, it needs a bit more punch. Try increasing the blacks and the contrast and see what happens. It's quite a spooky scene and a darker, more intimidating depth of B/W would really make this a special picture.

I also think it is a little tight (over cropped?) - What is the rest of this country estate like?

EdV
25th of January 2008 (Fri), 16:51
yeh it's nice, though being critical, it needs a bit more punch. Try increasing the blacks and the contrast and see what happens. It's quite a spooky scene and a darker, more intimidating depth of B/W would really make this a special picture.

I also think it is a little tight (over cropped?) - What is the rest of this country estate like?

Thanks BBB. This is pretty much my first attempt at B/W image so I was just feeling my way through PP. As far as cropping, it is only slightly cropped to remove most of a utility pole to the left but it is pretty darn close to full size.