View Full Version : First Attempt at Flowers
Dave.H
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 09:03
Like I said this is my first attempt at flowers. C&C welcome.
http://www.haughs.net/gallery/d/10418-1/IMG_5802.jpg
http://www.haughs.net/gallery/d/10421-1/IMG_5806.jpg
http://www.haughs.net/gallery/d/10423-1/IMG_5808.jpg
http://www.haughs.net/gallery/d/10425-1/IMG_5838.jpg
http://www.haughs.net/gallery/d/10427-1/IMG_5849.jpg
ajayclicks
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 09:36
I like the first two for the soft "artistic" feel, though i feel that the texture on the petals could have been captured better. :)
Cheers
randomgrafix
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 14:15
#1 looks great. nice luminance.
The next 3 are a bit under exposed in areas.
#5 is little blow out in the upper right hand side.
For a first attempt is excellent work...much better than my first.
Dave.H
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 14:23
Thanks guys. It was trickier than I thought it would be. Kinda went into it thinking there isn't much to it. :o
I like the luminance but had a hard time properly exposing the rest of the image. I suppose this is where a secontd light (even a work light) or a light box would be key? As you can tell I was holding my flash behind and off the to side of the flower for that look.. but it was hard to try and get ceiling bounce to fill it in from the other side....
sirbridge
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 17:35
I like the concept for No.1 but would prefer the radiant lines to ne sharp.
Ken Ramos
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 20:48
Great set of images here. :D I especially like no. 3 and 4 Really makes me long for spring/summer to arrive here in the mountains. :D
dpastern
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 23:54
No images...
Dave
S7000
21st of January 2008 (Mon), 23:56
No images here either...
macro junkie
22nd of January 2008 (Tue), 04:11
X is all i see
randomgrafix
22nd of January 2008 (Tue), 05:57
images appear fine to me
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